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Dian Parker's avatar

Sweet, just so.

man of aran's avatar

Thanks, Dian! A just so story, yes.

Dragoneye's avatar

from dust to wet... and the clinking cocktails. Beautiful slice of our pasts... Thanks!

man of aran's avatar

You're welcome, and thank you, Dragoneye! Glad it resonated.

man of aran's avatar

Thanks, Rod. Glad you like it!

Patris's avatar

Sweetness, this

man of aran's avatar

Thank you, Patris.

C.J. Heck's avatar

I love the poem! You've captured the kids perfectly ... as though it really happened (wink)

Thank you!

man of aran's avatar

Ah, maybe it did! Thanks so much, CJ!

C.J. Heck's avatar

You’re very welcome! 😉😊😁

Ronald Drimmel's avatar

That sweet in-between time, full of becoming. Thanks Alan. Well wrought, as usual.

man of aran's avatar

Yes, I like that phrase, 'full of becoming'! Thanks, Ronald.

Weston Parker's avatar

oh, that wonderful innocence, great capture.

man of aran's avatar

Thanks very much, Wes.

Fotini Masika's avatar

Oh, my -- just the bare thrill of callow flesh -- 🖤

Beautiful poem, Alan!

man of aran's avatar

Very glad you enjoyed it, Fotini, and thank for the restack!