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Jo Wright's avatar

Prescient.

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KR (Kenneth Rosen)'s avatar

Interesting selection of object and theme, and well-flung poetic dart. Though I don't know if a lemon is bitter or sour, but confessing and hoarding lemon concentrate is bitter and sour, pebble-grained lemon peel, tough as pigskin. How did evolution settle on such sour-bitterness to in guarantee proliferation, or whatever ate lemons in the wild? I purse my lips at the thought of it, just as you pursed your poem's oddness and frame.

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