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Shital Morjaria (she/her)'s avatar

Love that first photograph!

man of aran's avatar

Thanks Shital! Right out my front door!

Adrião Pereira da Cunha's avatar

What I love in this piece is how quietly it captures that moment when life asks you to choose a direction, even if you’re not ready. The repetition of “move” and “stay” feels like someone talking to themselves, trying to hear what their own heart wants. There’s a softness in the way the options unfold, as if the speaker is giving themselves permission rather than instructions. Nothing is rushed; the poem breathes. And then the shift to grass at the end grounds everything suddenly the choice isn’t abstract anymore, it’s something you can feel under your feet. “Plant new grass or let the grass grow” sounds like a small truth we all forget: sometimes growth happens even when we stand still. The poem holds that tension gently, without judgment. It feels like a quiet February moment when you realise spring is coming whether you move or not. And that makes the whole piece feel tender, honest, and very human.

man of aran's avatar

A wonderful and sensitive reading, once again. Thank you so much!

Dian Parker's avatar

It’s 4 degrees F here. So glad your spring is a’foot.

man of aran's avatar

Wow, bundle up, Dian! Here, I hope I’m not speaking too soon. It does feel too good to be true.

Ann Collins's avatar

Amazing photos, Alan. I love your lens on this hour, right down there with the flowers' point of view. O dewy beautiful world! You show how Life is always breaking in, always new again.

man of aran's avatar

Thanks for noticing the photography, Ann! On my belly for those :)

Ann Collins's avatar

💛💛💛

Joanne E Betzler's avatar

Brilliant.

man of aran's avatar

Thank you, Joanne!

Escape Artist Poetry's avatar

Some of both is always nice

man of aran's avatar

Yes, but sometimes one is chosen to avoid the other