Wonderful poem, amazing painting. I actually wrote a story about it in college, before I knew the name of it or the artist. Powerful stuff! The "quiet clap of dawn" is arresting...
Nighthawks at the Diner. From the Beats to Sinatra to Tom Waits. Oh what a thought and photo can open in the minds eye. Came to your substack through Patti Smith. Best of the best regards, Phoeagdor.
This poem, titled "Phillies," offers a vivid glimpse into the atmosphere of a particular place in a small town. The use of rich, evocative imagery and a gentle, introspective tone crafts a narrative that is both specific and universal.
The opening stanza sets the scene with the only "night light" in town, described as "saffron-emerald," a unique and visually striking image. The name "Phillies," positioned as a beacon in the night, suggests a place of warmth and familiarity. The mention of "Breughel and Vine" adds a touch of sophistication and possibly hints at an artistic, perhaps European influence.
The expectation of "a whole population," "radiant life," and "a really grand time" is quickly contrasted with the reality of the place. It's a quiet, introspective space where individuals are "sufficient unto themselves." This speaks to a deeper understanding of human nature, where people seek solace and simplicity in their daily lives. The missed train, a cup of coffee, and the nickel-operated player evoke a sense of nostalgia and a slower pace of life. The mention of "rhubarb pie a la mode" as an afterthought to love adds a whimsical, almost bittersweet touch to the poem.
The final stanza brings a sense of closure and comfort. The empty streets and darkness are not to be feared but embraced as part of the experience. The imagery of slipping into a red dress and tilting a fedora brim adds a sense of style and self-assuredness. The poem concludes with the "quiet clap of dawn," a beautifully understated way of suggesting the beginning of a new day, filled with quiet anticipation and the simple joys of life.
Overall, "Phillies" is a poem that celebrates the beauty in the ordinary and the comfort found in small, everyday moments. It's a reminder of the value in taking a step back to appreciate the simpler aspects of life, away from the hustle and bustle of a crowded, noisy world.
A strong mesmeric read this poem of yours. Thanks for evoking this and enabling me to drink a cuppa with good comfortable folk in a station house cafe of in-between.
Nice!
Love this poem
Great. Adds to the painting in a subtle and empathetic way. Thanks. rob
Wonderful poem, amazing painting. I actually wrote a story about it in college, before I knew the name of it or the artist. Powerful stuff! The "quiet clap of dawn" is arresting...
Exquisite use of punctuation, it makes for unique breathing to follow between the words. Much gratitude for seeking and finding a gem.
Really nice, got plenty of atmosphere
Nighthawks at the Diner. From the Beats to Sinatra to Tom Waits. Oh what a thought and photo can open in the minds eye. Came to your substack through Patti Smith. Best of the best regards, Phoeagdor.
This poem, titled "Phillies," offers a vivid glimpse into the atmosphere of a particular place in a small town. The use of rich, evocative imagery and a gentle, introspective tone crafts a narrative that is both specific and universal.
The opening stanza sets the scene with the only "night light" in town, described as "saffron-emerald," a unique and visually striking image. The name "Phillies," positioned as a beacon in the night, suggests a place of warmth and familiarity. The mention of "Breughel and Vine" adds a touch of sophistication and possibly hints at an artistic, perhaps European influence.
The expectation of "a whole population," "radiant life," and "a really grand time" is quickly contrasted with the reality of the place. It's a quiet, introspective space where individuals are "sufficient unto themselves." This speaks to a deeper understanding of human nature, where people seek solace and simplicity in their daily lives. The missed train, a cup of coffee, and the nickel-operated player evoke a sense of nostalgia and a slower pace of life. The mention of "rhubarb pie a la mode" as an afterthought to love adds a whimsical, almost bittersweet touch to the poem.
The final stanza brings a sense of closure and comfort. The empty streets and darkness are not to be feared but embraced as part of the experience. The imagery of slipping into a red dress and tilting a fedora brim adds a sense of style and self-assuredness. The poem concludes with the "quiet clap of dawn," a beautifully understated way of suggesting the beginning of a new day, filled with quiet anticipation and the simple joys of life.
Overall, "Phillies" is a poem that celebrates the beauty in the ordinary and the comfort found in small, everyday moments. It's a reminder of the value in taking a step back to appreciate the simpler aspects of life, away from the hustle and bustle of a crowded, noisy world.
Gorgeous.
Thank you Alan. I have always really liked this painting. I like this poem too.
A strong mesmeric read this poem of yours. Thanks for evoking this and enabling me to drink a cuppa with good comfortable folk in a station house cafe of in-between.
“…then prime your marrow for the quiet clap of dawn.” Love this! Great rhythm in the poem, ending in this.