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Escape Artist Poetry's avatar

Wonderful!

What I like best about this one is the Zen of a complete poem within your poem — stripped naked — no painting, no explanation, no surplusage required

‘Still Life’ ends quietly on the word ‘stillness’

That’s the poem that struck me

Julie York's avatar

I love blueberries, especially in the summer time. Raisans are another one of my favorite fruits. I remember my Mom would always make my sister and I eat raisans for lunch. I hated them at the time. I remember getting stuck eating them for lunch at school when I was in third grade. One of my classmates wanted to trade something from her lunch for something of mine. She decided that she wanted my potato or barbeque chips for her grapes. I didn't care for the green grapes that she gave me, but I wanted to play with her and be her friend. We ended up playing together during recess.

When my Mom found out that I was trading part of my lunch to a classmate of mine, she wasn't too happy about it. I'm not sure if my sister trade part of her lunch to a classmate of hers or if she ended up eating her raisans during lunch recess

I want to add that those pictures of the Japanese Gardens are beautiful. Japan must be a beautiful country

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