Emmet Gowin, Nancy, Danville, Virginia, 1969
Could I love this blissful poem any more? I think not🙏
Lovely
This is almost painful in its innate truth and beauty
Wow, Alan, this is a very moving piece. I can’t help but think of my own daughter. Well done.
This is very good.
Such beautiful lines. Alan. So many, it’s too hard to choose. Nicely done.
Marvelous beginning and middle building to a marvelous end that particularly brings out the marvel of the photo.
Wonderful flow in you poem. It captures that inner strength children have and the abundance of hope.
You are such a strong poet, and getting better with each poem. The fluidity, metaphors, language, juxtapositions, images…I mean, damn you’re good.
Thank you. I love this poem.
Could I love this blissful poem any more? I think not🙏
Lovely
This is almost painful in its innate truth and beauty
Wow, Alan, this is a very moving piece. I can’t help but think of my own daughter. Well done.
This is very good.
Such beautiful lines. Alan. So many, it’s too hard to choose. Nicely done.
Marvelous beginning and middle building to a marvelous end that particularly brings out the marvel of the photo.
Wonderful flow in you poem. It captures that inner strength children have and the abundance of hope.
You are such a strong poet, and getting better with each poem. The fluidity, metaphors, language, juxtapositions, images…I mean, damn you’re good.
Thank you. I love this poem.