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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

Sword of truth promises no dishonor.

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man of aran's avatar

Yes, the honourable thing to do! :) Thanks 🙏

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Thomas Rist's avatar

Fabulous. Such striking images. Not a word wasted.

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man of aran's avatar

Thanks Thomas! Good to hear that.

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Mark Bramhall's avatar

Exquisite. Like the painting. The Prufrock allusion seems to arrive right on time, amidst the apples and the big grape, yet it puzzles me. In this setting, though, I'm content to puzzle.

Lovely to encounter this piece, first thing in the day!

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man of aran's avatar

Thanks, Mark! Interestingly, Eliot and Getler were acquainted, which I didn’t know about when I wrote this.

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Karen E Sandberg's avatar

Love the juxtaposition of still and still and sinister. Pulls the poem into something sinister. Good poem.

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man of aran's avatar

Thank you, Karen! Appreciate the observation.

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Andrew Jazprose Hill's avatar

Beautiful and fascinating! Thanks for introducing me to an artist I wasn’t familiar with. And for your lovely poetic interpretation of the work.

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man of aran's avatar

Thanks, Andrew. He’s a fascinating figure, a lot of interesting work.

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Dian Parker's avatar

WOW!

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Mark Bramhall's avatar

Woah. That should be a secret! it's too good to be a coincidence. Perhaps you just time-traveled onto their wavelength.

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Patris's avatar

Writing reflectively opens portals into time, not even realizing we sometimes act as scribes to those whispering in our unconscious.

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