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Ann Collins's avatar

And I think of the way

in our home, somehow

(I know how), there are

always oranges

🧡so lovely

man of aran's avatar

Thank you, Ann.

Richbee's avatar

Mi casa, Tu casa .

My half, your half

Make a whole;

But we fulfill

Each other with sunshine

Ripe fruit taken in time.

man of aran's avatar

We do our best! Thanks, Richard.

Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Another beautiful poem. From painting, to birthday to oranges always present at home. If nothing else, there's always a reason to connect when oranges are around. No reason, just orange. I like the symbolism in that and it keeps the poem together. Never heard of the painter and never seen this art work before. Happy Birthday!

man of aran's avatar

Thank you, Pilgrim, I'll pass on the birthday wishes! Winslow Homer has a prominent place in American art history. This piece is atypical. I have a vivid memory from childhood seeing his painting, The Gulf Stream, in a book. The diametric opposite of domesticity. He's worth checking out.

Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Thank you man of aran. Now that there’s a name I am sure it will pop up again and I will see his work elsewhere.

Briana Elizabeth's avatar

Beautiful.

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Thanks, Briana. Glad you like it.

Dian Parker's avatar

Another beauty of yours. 🧡

Daniel A Detwiler Ph.D.'s avatar

Me gusta mucho este poema de las naranjas y mucho más. Gracias. Daniel

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Thanks, Daniel. I actually don't know Spanish, so I plugged this into Google translate. Appreciate the appreciation!

Fotini Masika's avatar

Pure sunshine! 💛

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That was the idea! Glad it come through. Thanks, Fotini.

🌹🌹🌹's avatar

Para mi media naranja en algun Lugar de la Tierra,soñando Con estar conmigo,de la misma forma que es toy soñando Con El.🌹💌

man of aran's avatar

Beautiful, 3 roses!

Weston Parker's avatar

Really lovely going back and forth between something captured forever and the here and now.

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Very glad it worked for you, Wes.

Thomas Rist's avatar

A lovely balance to this meditation, line after line; it makes it very worthwhile!

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So glad! Thanks, Thomas.

Patris's avatar

A beautiful, evocative piece. The imagery of the orange, shared, is potent..

(for those unfamiliar with Homer, although he began as an illustrator, his ability to capture movement- and human gesture and posture (I think)especially in naval paintings, show him a master.

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Thank you, Patris. Yes, My first encounter as a child was The Gulf Stream. Emblazoned in my mind.

Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

Such a great description of this very alive painting:

"and not actually still,

more like quivering

blessed life: primed

to pick and to eat"

Also, I just love the second stanza.

man of aran's avatar

Thanks so much, Margaret, for your kind reading!

Jonathan Potter's avatar

this is so lovely and calm and perfect, the two stanzas like a deep easy breath and a relaxed exhalation

Ronald Drimmel's avatar

Full of juicy gratitude. Wonderful. And nicely ended.

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So glad you liked, it Ronald!

MK Creel's avatar

Beautiful poem.

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Thanks so much, MK!