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man of aran's avatar

Thanks so much, Bethel!

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Richbee's avatar

Chopsticks smooth next to mat raised

Kite-like flying birds soar high

Drop fresh sushi by my plate.

Enjoy sake arm with imagined mountain in distance. Shinshigti(fantastic)

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man of aran's avatar

You complete the reverie! Thanks, Richard.

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Annie Choate's avatar

How satisfying!

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man of aran's avatar

How gratifying!

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Weston Parker's avatar

very nice.

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man of aran's avatar

Thanks, Wes!

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Mike Speriosu's avatar

Wow, this piece makes me so nostalgic for Japan. Thank you!

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man of aran's avatar

Yes, me too. One reason Japan figures in my writings.

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Ann Collins's avatar

I like the rhythm of the 777--very cool! ✈️

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man of aran's avatar

Glad to know it worked for you, Ann. Never know when I just make something up!

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Ann Collins's avatar

I admire your honesty in just putting it out there! Creative experimentation is a doorway where all art finds its way into the world. You’re a word scientist!🔬

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man of aran's avatar

Nice. The scientific method, yes! Thanks, Ann.

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David's avatar

Lovely work

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man of aran's avatar

Thanks a lot, David!

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Dian Parker's avatar

Everything you write these days is good! Keep flying!

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man of aran's avatar

I intend to! Thanks so much for your support, Dian!

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Deborah Brasket's avatar

"Lured by the flow every thing moves as it will"--love this. Very Zen.

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man of aran's avatar

Thank you!

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